I Am From
I am from hair extensions, music
and great tasting food.
I am from basketballs, volleyballs
and athletic games.
I am from bi-polar weather,
such as sunshine and tornadoes.
I am from red, white and blue stripes,
that is the country's colors.
I am from a military strong, bullying
other places in the world country.
I am from a big, successful, money
hungry country.
I am baked potatoes, full cooked steak
and corn on the cob.
I am from doctor pepper, ice cold Pepsi,
and sprite.
I am from Burger King, McDonald's
and Wendy's.
I am from great family, friends
and animals.
I am from having fun, being tired
and late night movies.
I am from pools, sports
and laughing a lot.
I am from my Mom, Dad
and two cats named Max and Harry.
I am from wind that howls like the moon,
a cat that barks like a dog,
and house that smells like glazed candle's.
Literary devices used: Alliteration.
Free verse
Simile
Meteaphor
Wow so inspirational I love it made me almost cry
ReplyDeleteI like how you said you're from bi-polar weather such as sunshine and tornadoes.
ReplyDeleteVery playful tone I can tell you had fun doing this and you did a nice job
ReplyDeleteI agree with u that the country is money hungry and a bully.
ReplyDeleteLol
I like how you described yourself and MURICA' all in one poem.
ReplyDelete"I am from wind that howls like the moon, a cat that barks like a dog," I love this line.
ReplyDeleteI love it and now I want food
ReplyDeleteAliyah,
ReplyDeleteI think that was fantastic! It was genuine and honest! I think your stanza about your pride in the country was very well worded.
I love the way you used your rhymes, it was very funny. XD I love the way you incorporated food into your poem. 😖 I'm hungry now!!!😖
ReplyDeleteI like how you used food to describe yourself. It sounded very good.
ReplyDeleteI love your poem and how you used the poem to say that your from this country and described it
ReplyDeleteYour poem was ... descriptive and made me hungry.
ReplyDeleteGreat poem, even though some of it was a lie.
ReplyDeleteI love how you described the U.S. with your own opinions.
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